Corrections for Website 1st Draft

From my first draft my corrections were:
- Add Ken Burns effect on certain shots to create movement on them and add more 'life' those shots.
- Trim 1:48 because it looks like my performers are waiting to be told to begin by the producer(me).
- Change summer '19 on the polaroids to summer '91 to help the narrative be clearer.
- Add more footage of the older woman because the narrative is not 100% clear and may be confusing to viewers who do not know my idea. 
- Fill the dead time, that i have of the teenagers dancing, with more shots of the older women. This will also help the correction above. 


How I changed these:
- I was unable to add on the Ken Burns effect on the editing software I was using so this correction could not be completed. 
- I changed the polaroid shots from summer '19 to summer '91.
- I also changed many of my shots around and took out some of the dancing to create space for shots of the older woman. I included the older woman looking in photo books, the woman in the same place as the teenager and also included small links of the older woman with shots of Tori (teenager). For example after the shots of the teenage group playing football I added in shots of the older woman with her foot on a ball in the same location but looking at photo books to show her memories.

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