My corrections were: - Music section it is too close to the video at the top. - Change the behind the scenes to an interview with the artist. At the end put in a snippet of the production to create a 'want' of the audience to watch. - Add a quote from Skyla to the charity section = link it more closely to the artist . - Add a price to the merchandise and a buy now tab. How these were corrected: - I moved the whole music section down the page more to create a larger gap between them. - I changed the behind the scenes to an interview of me with the artist to talk about the charity used in the video and why it was close to Skyla's heart. I also added a small part of the final production to the video to create a command to buy. - I added a quote from Skyla talking about the charity. - I created a merchandise store that the items can be added to the basket.
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